Thursday, June 29, 2023

Screening rough cut


 Showed (and watched) Gumshoe for the first time today. There were a dozen people there including all but one of the class as well as a few others who helped through voice or other. I was liking much of it but I see it with the knowledge of what is yet to happen and how one thing will eventually run into and fuse with things on either side of it. Comments I received primarily suggested that it is too long, too disconnected, and/or too confusing. Comments sent me into a pretty huge downward spiral, which is also likely due to having worked on it to exhaustion without break for 8 weeks. I know there is something here so I probably won't show it to anyone again until I know they can see what I see. 

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